Well the colouring isn so bad. Though yeah.. that's an area you could do to put more effort into! A bit of time n patience is all that's needed! >> Colouring can really make or break a pic.
Saying that like I said, the colouring's okay on this if a bit lazy in places (namely Nimbus).

I like the faces, especially Goku's, all very much the cuteness (he looks younger than Gohan though ^^).

Dunno how open you are to CC so I'll leave that be.

Nice pic.

What an awesome way of doing hair! Great coloring skills. Goten looks precious : )

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oh i dont dislike Critque i love it, it helps me improve immensly^^
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I love dragonball z. This is really nice. Keep up the good work.

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Okies, took me long enough. But I'm here now!
Goten's arms are too thin, -especially- the right one. They're twigs! About double thickness would help. It'd mean the hands need to be bit bigger as well to stay in proportion. Otherwise he looks fine to me.

Gohan.
Ok, I'm not sure if it's that his arm is too thin or if it's just because he's got his gut jutting out that makes him look wrong. This is a bit of an odd pose. Also I think you've got his sash a little too high up as it's bringing his bum up too high and making his torso that lil bit too short.
His fisted hand also needs to enlarge more out from the wrist. Look at your own arm/hand and you can see that it narrows from the elbow to the wrist then it flares out again for the hand. It doesn't matter what pose your fist takes, it's always gonna flare a little at the wrist joint into the hand. I think that'd help things a bit in general that.

Both Goku and Bardock have the same problem with one thing in particular.
They're both hugging themselves with how far in you've brought their elbows in with their arm crosses. The elbows should be at their hips in relation to their body, or further out even. (this doesn mean they're -down- at the hips, just that they're in line with them). Your two have the elbows in their guts more than at their hips. You'll find the arms in general sit better once this problem is fixed.

Otherwise yeah, you're good. Hope that helped any ^^

ah thanks(wow so u typed so much xD) ill keep those things in mind next time.

Ah, I'm like that. It's fun criticing (when I can be bothered anyways >> and when people don't mind I like to give input to help them improve, so yes.
N that wasn -too- much! Average or so! ^^

Anywho, you're welcome n if you want crits at any point, I'm a good person to pester about such things as I'm happy to do so n such. So yes.

Toodles now!